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Everything has systems.
Endless patterns, overflowing
There's an equation for all
Energy, matter
Problems, endless problems
Never being solved
Wandering through the world
Lost.

Find the variables
Plug in the solutions
Switch the signs
Switch the plot
Solve it already

Just STOP
Forcing your
Relentless logic on me.
©2006-2009 ~Oh-that-sucks
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Author's Comments

I've had the idea for this jumping in my head for a while, and I've finally gotten it into somewhat decent structure.
Hope you enjoy.

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Thanks

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It doesn't have to make sense, it just does.
"Sometimes I doubt your commitment to sparkle motion!"
:iconbefore-the-storm:
An excellent poem. It conveys its message clearly and in a good rhythm (can never spell that word ><;).

Is 'Renlentess' meant to be 'relentless' btw?

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-=+// Cute. Fat. And Huggable. :heart: \\+=-
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Why yes, yes it is supposed to be, and I never noticed that before... I'm a horrible proofreader.

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If no one remebers something, it's like it never really happened.
:icondarkenwarrior:
interesting...turly...

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my xbox live account is Darken warrior1 and I am in a clan called Blackwater. we play with real military tactics on several games but when we arent in a clan match or having training we just hang out like friends and always have fun.

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